Eshita, I loved the fact " the main organ is in the lungs" I didn't know that. I am so interested and the information that you but in you writing is stunning about the humans circulatory and respiratory system.
Hello Eshita I like your introduction I like that you added a question the question got me hooked and made me want to read more. I didn't know that the body has two circulatory system. I also didn't know that the well you are resting the body pumps five litres to your body in a minute. WOW! your pice is really interesting. It's cool that you did two systems your piece is amazing
Eshita,
ReplyDeleteI loved the fact " the main organ is in the lungs" I didn't know that. I am so interested and the information that you but in you writing is stunning about the humans circulatory and respiratory system.
Hello Eshita
ReplyDeleteI like your introduction I like that you added a question the question got me hooked and made me want to read more. I didn't know that the body has two circulatory system. I also didn't know that the well you are resting the body pumps five litres to your body in a minute. WOW! your pice is really interesting. It's cool that you did two systems your piece is amazing