For our how we are unit I am righting about the owl eye. I put out the men details in the book that I read about owl's. I only put out the bits that where focusing on the owl eye.
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Hi Vivian! I think you did an amazing job in your introduction, and I love the interesting facts that you put in! Something that I think you need to work on is spelling. One word that you spelled wrong was unite, it is actually spelled unit, but you changed that before I commented. Another word is righting, but it is spelled writing. And the last spelling mistake was men, it is actually main. But over all, I think you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Vivian!!! I really loved your essay, and it had so many details. I didn't care about spelling, and the best part was I learned something new! I've always wondered why owls move their heads alot... Anyways, I think it was great!
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