The extreme move by Ravi Doshi
Sahil’s favorite city is Mumbai in 1935 he lives there he meets he meets someone migrates and to foreign culture read more to find out what happens next. Most of his family was in Mumbai but turns out he is in Mumbai. He does a lot of chores in. Mumbai He helps his family with making tools to get bigger house at his house he was thinking how does he make such good houses and make bigger houses for other people. Then one day someone named Sally met him they had married two years after they met. Sally loved Belgium. She was from Belgium. But came for five years to Mumbai for a vacation but she married and realized that she could not go to Belgium unless she took Sahil. So she decided that she would stay for some time. In Mumbai they were staying there for some time. Then Sally thought it was time to go day so Sally decided to go to Belgium. Sahil new why she wanted to go Belgium was where she was from all her family was there. Sahil had to come with her. He said “No I do not want to go” his family said you should go to foreign culture “you have to go”. ”fine I will come”
aæIt was hard moving there he had to walk all the way to a train station. By the time he reached the train station his legs were dead. He was so tired he slept for the entire train rides. It took him two days moving from train station to train station. in the two days every hour he said are we there yet he was so impatient Sally was so sensitive she kept saying no. He knew that he was so tired so he had to sleep at the train station for an hour. When he was walking to the house he was walking with all the strength in him turned out he had a lot because of sleeping that much he could run so could Sally because she also slept in the train. They finally reached at two o'clock. First in Belgium when Sahil got a job he got it in a diamond company when he went out he realized he had to walk all the way there but it was very cold there on the street. He had hot clothes because in Mumbai it is hot. But he had to go to work. So he found out Sally was really good at knitting. So she knitted him really warm clothes. A suit it took her five days until she finished. He was so annoying he was saying Done Done constantly Sally kept saying no. And he could go to work. He had to count so many diamonds. So Sally helped him and he finally was rich but really hard working.
something i liked a about is your story is that how you told the reader that sally wanted to go back to belgium but didn't want to leave her love you described that very well. something i didn't understand when you put your read to find out with your story
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