Leah I think u really described your migration and I LOVE HOW CREATIVE U WERE Your actors were really good. I'm glad u still have a little humour in yours Especially George. I think u made a great story Maybe u could do a little more about the story BUT I HEART IT!MORE THEN TOBY.!
I really like it
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ReplyDeleteI really like the acting that you did leah and I like taht part where george says can we go home now or how much longer
ReplyDeleteI like the music and the acting. I think it's great for our new inquiry unit!
ReplyDeleteI like the way what George act and all the songs and the passport thing
ReplyDeleteLeah I think u really described your migration and I LOVE HOW CREATIVE U WERE Your actors were really good. I'm glad u still have a little humour in yours Especially George. I think u made a great story Maybe u could do a little more about the story BUT I HEART IT!MORE THEN TOBY.!
ReplyDeletei think u could add more voice and some colored photo but i also like ur colored photos
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