To Vivian. I really like the story, and how you were able to have dialogue in it. Personally, I am horrible at adding dialogue and to me, that really added a lot to your story. I also liked your word choice, until Martin's sparkled like a star. Keep it up!
To Vivian.
ReplyDeleteI really like the story, and how you were able to have dialogue in it. Personally, I am horrible at adding dialogue and to me, that really added a lot to your story. I also liked your word choice, until Martin's sparkled like a star. Keep it up!
Commented by Tarika