Monday 29 January 2018

Run Through The Flames - Vivian

This is an historical fiction story. It baste off of true events in my grate grate grandpas migration to United states of America from Ireland.


published document


1 comment:

  1. To Vivian.
    I really like the story, and how you were able to have dialogue in it. Personally, I am horrible at adding dialogue and to me, that really added a lot to your story. I also liked your word choice, until Martin's sparkled like a star. Keep it up!

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